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Revision Goals Analysis Essay

Revision Goals Analysis Essay

Q QUESTION: Please write THREE revision goals for your Analysis Essay. Revision goals should be as specific and detailed as possible. One good measure of specificity is whether the goal can ONLY apply to the project you are working on, or if it could just as easily apply to other essays or to essays in general. Remember that every revision goal should address WHAT the goal is, WHY you have set it (what you see in the essay that requires the goal and/or what you hope the goal will accomplish), and HOW you will achieve it, and each aspect should be specific. Please write one short paragraph for each goal with a minimum of three sentences (one for each of the three aspects you are describing - what, why, how)

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Solnit from the beginning itself provides a concrete prejudiced conclusion towards High Schools. She allows little scope for people to form a notion. She sounds very over confident rather over confident from the beginning. My goal in this essay is to argue that she sounds too overconfident without putting forward valid claims in the beginning. Also from reading Trimble’s Writing with Style we learnt that the opener should be good but it should not direct the readers towards the writer’s conception, rather allow the readers to understand on their own.